tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3175408984069796542.post3737258235235387531..comments2023-04-10T06:42:44.471-04:00Comments on Literary Snippets: The Dead ImagoGary Gauthierhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01939746775173387425noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3175408984069796542.post-13474959119043305162011-10-05T21:31:03.559-04:002011-10-05T21:31:03.559-04:00What a great picture and a wonderful story to go w...What a great picture and a wonderful story to go with it. Well done!<br /><br />#189Karen deBlieckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11833882790709316409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3175408984069796542.post-63393863262385309102011-10-04T11:45:13.294-04:002011-10-04T11:45:13.294-04:00Great job! There is more where this came from, I ...Great job! There is more where this came from, I am sure.<br /><br />#188the wild magnoliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14355836751549469688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3175408984069796542.post-27759611356583893412011-10-03T15:51:18.627-04:002011-10-03T15:51:18.627-04:00Oooh what came first, the picture or the story? Gr...Oooh what came first, the picture or the story? Great imagery you created.Claire Hennessyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16576410137759875223noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3175408984069796542.post-34312056157795435942011-10-01T23:54:14.970-04:002011-10-01T23:54:14.970-04:00Great job! I didn't even notice the challange ...Great job! I didn't even notice the challange words as they blended in with ease!Kerri Cuevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13305892536084882077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3175408984069796542.post-34976936674058569222011-10-01T07:27:05.974-04:002011-10-01T07:27:05.974-04:00Great suspense in this piece. I could feel the for...Great suspense in this piece. I could feel the foreboding that hung over him. You made the use of the challenge words seem effortless. And I loved the painting. All in all, well done.<br /><br />My entry is 128 if you want to have a peek.Elizabeth Varadan, Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01708206753256682635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3175408984069796542.post-49640883361486546032011-09-29T21:43:48.225-04:002011-09-29T21:43:48.225-04:00Mysterious and tense.
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Join me at the...Mysterious and tense. <br /><br /><br />---------<br /><br />Join me at the <a href="http://amloki.blogspot.com/p/sign-up-for-rule-of-three-blogfest.html" rel="nofollow">Rule of Three Writers' Blogfest!</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04283371140346602856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3175408984069796542.post-33734199616905365122011-09-28T20:46:29.145-04:002011-09-28T20:46:29.145-04:00Thanks to everyone for the very supportive and com...Thanks to everyone for the very supportive and complimentary comments.Gary Gauthierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01939746775173387425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3175408984069796542.post-42257990341087566782011-09-27T18:46:01.856-04:002011-09-27T18:46:01.856-04:00Great job. I want to know more about the character...Great job. I want to know more about the character too.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3175408984069796542.post-19885118048480618332011-09-27T00:45:07.177-04:002011-09-27T00:45:07.177-04:00I like the gothic feel, and the picture helps.I like the gothic feel, and the picture helps.Mynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07595087387069634003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3175408984069796542.post-63645653344408962742011-09-25T16:41:19.169-04:002011-09-25T16:41:19.169-04:00Good job!Good job!Zan Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00166450116524323462noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3175408984069796542.post-23548689553580676132011-09-25T06:44:50.706-04:002011-09-25T06:44:50.706-04:00Mystical and full of strong imagery. Well done!Mystical and full of strong imagery. Well done!Joannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00633484787634197878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3175408984069796542.post-46368129792365348672011-09-24T17:30:35.574-04:002011-09-24T17:30:35.574-04:00Great use of imagery and emotion. I was intrigued ...Great use of imagery and emotion. I was intrigued to find out exactly what he'd done.Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07138682498522090332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3175408984069796542.post-74268449837912040142011-09-24T15:26:54.455-04:002011-09-24T15:26:54.455-04:00Love your take on the words and the dark story. So...Love your take on the words and the dark story. So noir. I wrote about how I couldn't write. I'm number 62.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3175408984069796542.post-21409719249319919142011-09-24T14:30:12.316-04:002011-09-24T14:30:12.316-04:00Makes me want to know what he did!
The Write Soil...Makes me want to know what he did!<br /><br /><a href="http://thewritesoil.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">The Write Soil</a><br /><br />My entry is #50.Dawn M. Hamsherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17782257750640888264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3175408984069796542.post-10060506722159396792011-09-24T11:06:18.001-04:002011-09-24T11:06:18.001-04:00Hi Gary, I enjoyed this very much. I couldn't ...Hi Gary, I enjoyed this very much. I couldn't help but wonder if the character may somehow be sufferring from either schizophrenia or another form of mental illness? Nicely done! I always enjoy seeing the paintings you incorporate into your blog posts;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3175408984069796542.post-4672285374915198132011-09-24T10:28:57.638-04:002011-09-24T10:28:57.638-04:00This was really well-written, and I'm definite...This was really well-written, and I'm definitely intrigued! What did he do exactly, or do I want to know? :p I liked this.Cortney Pearsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00774060537148628453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3175408984069796542.post-66644670158630044692011-09-24T00:59:00.479-04:002011-09-24T00:59:00.479-04:00Oops. I meant to ask if he's already in hell f...Oops. I meant to ask if he's already in hell for whatever he did, and tell you I'm number 52, very flighty compared to yours.Sher A. Harthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03067955594103356768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3175408984069796542.post-16049424890891721602011-09-24T00:54:57.357-04:002011-09-24T00:54:57.357-04:00Yeah, what they all said. You know your language a...Yeah, what they all said. You know your language and use it like a pro. Couldn't ask for better. I think I've now followed you everywhere I could.Sher A. Harthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03067955594103356768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3175408984069796542.post-83818811722051196102011-09-23T15:14:37.443-04:002011-09-23T15:14:37.443-04:00I absolutely want to know what he did that he feel...I absolutely want to know what he did that he feels so badly about. Very well done! I'm #34!Gwen Gardnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13132836346305559246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3175408984069796542.post-21329566518348032762011-09-23T14:42:41.449-04:002011-09-23T14:42:41.449-04:00Awesome piece! I love how your words flow effortle...Awesome piece! I love how your words flow effortlessly. I'm also curious to see what happens next. Your MC is flawed, yet completely human. Very interesting.F.E. Sewellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04222968586032981217noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3175408984069796542.post-38258406036962111142011-09-23T00:04:41.498-04:002011-09-23T00:04:41.498-04:00Jen hit the nail on the head! By not having these ...Jen hit the nail on the head! By not having these uncommon words stand out, this piece reads very smoothly. Great job.Michael Hayneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07653617216453974106noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3175408984069796542.post-50200763928510821182011-09-22T22:18:32.041-04:002011-09-22T22:18:32.041-04:00Lovely mix of poetic wording and mysterious imager...Lovely mix of poetic wording and mysterious imagery. What has he done that cannot be undone? Why would someone seek vengence against him? Good questions after reading your entry, Gary. ~ NadjaNadja Notarianihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01339595239944177531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3175408984069796542.post-69114182488853816332011-09-22T21:34:56.747-04:002011-09-22T21:34:56.747-04:00Very well done. The words flowed beautifully. You ...Very well done. The words flowed beautifully. You made it feel natural. I, too, want to know what the protagonist has done and the whole story behind it.Christine Rainshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08263694662585963900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3175408984069796542.post-48391893637042490722011-09-22T21:00:37.850-04:002011-09-22T21:00:37.850-04:00I love how you camouflaged the challenge words wit...I love how you camouflaged the challenge words with other less common words! Also, this piece leaves me wanting to know about this character and what he's done. Great job!Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12314617048592538691noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3175408984069796542.post-32971795209963052012011-09-22T20:29:58.428-04:002011-09-22T20:29:58.428-04:00I'm so impressed by the people who can make th...I'm so impressed by the people who can make this look simple. You used those words as though they made sense to you all along.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com